We were walking to the fair, and we got there you could smell the popcorn and the yummy fairy floss.
But then I saw them… I saw BALLOONS!!!!, I rushed to my mum and I asked if I could get one. Me and my mum walked over to the balloon stand. There was a nice lady ‘’hi there’’ the nice lady said ‘’would you like a balloon’’ she said ‘’yes please’’ I said ‘’the orange one please it spoke to me’’ I said ‘’ why don’t you want the yellow’’ my mum said ‘’ MUM!!!! I am not getting a yellow balloon I want a orange balloon’’ I said madly
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Thats nice i like the end bit